As for your poem, the beat is very nice, very easy to read. The imagery was also very nice, the stanza: “For winter in these farmers towns,
Is cold and clean and bright,
And the smell of snow is crisp and fresh,
As calm as death at night.” I thought was particularly good, for some reason, when people talk about sounds in their work it conjures more imagery for me than when actual places are being described.

In any case sir, a job well done, I can’t wait to hear what you do for summer.